WELCOME TO MAHJONG HELL!

This is my first time timing with a completely new workflow, under the direction of a number of old established fansubbers to some degree.
Timing was done with the intention of applying postprocessing for the first time, using actual Aegisub detected keyframes this time having restored them from the mangled AMZN Toonzhub release, resulting in a different style result than I usually do.
(Yes, I was searching for keyframes in the video frame by frame manually for 3 months and didn’t know there were supposed to be purple lines.)

Please critique this as much as possible. Not sure my lead in settings are ideal just yet.
I may redo it later by hand the old way to meet my own standards.

If this series has been dropped, I may try translating it myself, but I’m really not equipped for the job other than having sponged off vocab from anime. It could be a good learning experience if anything.
I’m also working on Medalist now, sorta, so we’ll see.