At 06:33/06:40, I recommend changing the lines to something like: “I’ll fill her in when we talk later”, “Please, hear me out! talk to me, too!” seeing as he’s giving him a phone for later, repeated use rather than merely asking for an immediate chat.
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Chortos-2
Thanks!
At 06:33/06:40, I recommend changing the lines to something like: “I’ll fill her in when we talk later”, “Please,
hear me out!talk to me, too!” seeing as he’s giving him a phone for later, repeated use rather than merely asking for an immediate chat.serenae (uploader)
Thank you! I will tweak those lines for the v2 batches.
Migon
Thank you!