Thank you for all the work and for listening to comments!
Oh, I’ve just spotted another typo in ep06, but I guess it’s too late, oh well. “here in this world. pursuing the path” should probably have a comma instead of the full stop. And on that note, three lines later, I’d’ve added a comma before vocative “Kurumi”. Edit: oh, and another in ep09: “we’ve doing”.
Ah, oh well. Next time I should maybe wait a day or two before putting out a final batch, just in case I (or anyone else) spot anything to fix. But sincerely thanks again for the corrections, it helps a ton.
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Migon
Thank you!
Chortos-2
Thank you!
FYI I’ve left a few edit suggestions for earlier episodes on the ep11 torrent.
And a small correction for this episode: “if it’s want you truly desire” should be “what”, not “want”.
serenae (uploader)
Thank you, I’ve fixed that mistake in episode 12, and also fixed those issues for the other episodes in the final batches! Much appreciated as always!
Chortos-2
Thank you for all the work and for listening to comments!
Oh, I’ve just spotted another typo in ep06, but I guess it’s too late, oh well. “here in this world. pursuing the path” should probably have a comma instead of the full stop. And on that note, three lines later, I’d’ve added a comma before vocative “Kurumi”. Edit: oh, and another in ep09: “we’ve doing”.
serenae (uploader)
Ah, oh well. Next time I should maybe wait a day or two before putting out a final batch, just in case I (or anyone else) spot anything to fix. But sincerely thanks again for the corrections, it helps a ton.