06:21 "felling" -> "feeling"
11:42 I think "who has" should be "who have" here. I read it over a few times and it just sounds off to me the way it is.
12:54 "form" -> "from"
17:29 "It's the famous for her kitty kitty dance" missing a word here. Between "the" and "famous". Or you could trim out "It's the" and start the line with "Famous for her..." maybe. That would flow fine with the next line.
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