Thanks! Found a few errors.
05:44 "Your only concern is how other see you, and forcing me to study, study, study..." -> "Your only concern is how others see you, and forcing me to study, study, study..."
17:13 "I had up to 171 people including disciples." -> "It had up to 171 people including disciples."
20:40 "Jun-sama is currently on his way back to China." -> "Jun-sama is currently on her way back to China."
21:36 "That's why you have placed the sould of my black horse in that of a white ghost." -> "That's why you have placed the soul of my black horse in that of a white ghost."
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