Still a mess. Misspellings, wrong tenses, wrong words ("your" instead of "you're"), grammar errors ("seen" instead of "see"), etc.
I realize you were trying to be fast getting this out and it is appreciated, but running the script through a spell and grammar checker would be worth the time, as would a smaller font. Keep working on these with the suggested improvements and you will get somewhere.
Thanks again for the quick posting. It does make it understandable to non-Japanese speakers. Keep at it.
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