I'm pretty new at this so I don't really know what you mean by screenshots of TL and TS, but here's a handful of screenshots https://imgur.com/a/Y1KXCfO
You definitely need to work on styling, the size is way too small for example (if 1080p, use a font like Gandhi Sans at around size ~80, vertical margin 50 and a little bit of a border helps too). Hopefully this helps in the future, thanks for the TL anyway, looks watchable and it's a fine attempt if this your first. Good job, regardless.
thanks for the translation, i made some modifications here and there... https://www42.zippyshare.com/v/pnVfKR0O/file.html (fonts: https://www59.zippyshare.com/v/luMD4Ort/file.html )
but yeah, i noticed some lines that didn't make sense and left them as they are as i have zero knowledge of japanese... hopefully, a quality checker will come and do it!
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