There are more OCR errors than just the Mayugords -> Mayugoro's you patched. I am still going through it but in the first 12 minutes alone you have clay -> day and even/one -> everyone.
Cursory run through. Line number in Aegisub.
10: clay -> day
36: even/one -> everyone
315: Wham? Wham? -> What? What? (Not sure on this one.)
601: you 're -> you’re
708: errant '
776: Hal -> Hall
838: You are missing a line before this one. “Or Maybe…” from the official subs.
1008: pest->past
1014,1061: capital W
86,144,559,561,562,564,565,566,581,587,595,605,610,621,632,652,725,766,955,958,989,1056,1090,1092,1124: lowecase L -> capital i
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